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The graph and chart below give information on the average daily maximum and minimum temperatures in degrees Celsius (°C) and the average number of days with rainfall each month for two Australian cities. Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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The line graph compares the average highest and lowest temperatures a day (measured in Celsius),
whereas
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 the bar chart demonstrates the average duration of days with rainfall in
Brisbane
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 and
Canberra
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.
Overall
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,
Brisbane
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 experiences a warmer climate, especially at the start and
at the end
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 of the year.
In contrast
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,
Canberra
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 is significantly cooler, with
June
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 and July being the coldest months.
To begin
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, in January
Brisbane
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 has a
temperature
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 of about 26 degrees, slightly rising to 30 in February, representing the hottest month during the year.
However
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, the number dropped in April, at just above 20, fluctuating to around 25 (May) and back in
June
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 and July, at
slighly
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slightly
 over 20. After that, the
temperature
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 was constantly growing to the number of 30.
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, January, February and December were the hottest months in
Canberra
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druting
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during
 the year, at around 27 degrees.
Nevertheless
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, the minimum
temperature
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 for the same city was observed in
June
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 and July, at just above 0,
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 the lowest
temperature
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 for
Brisbane
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 was 10 in July and August.
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, in
Brisbane
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, the highest amount of rainfall was noted in February and March, lasting for 14 days.
Canberra
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 faces rainy weather more often, particularly in
June
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, July, August and October, enduring for 10 days.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words brisbane, canberra, june, temperature with synonyms.
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