In some parts of the world people try to find out one's own family history. Why do people do this? Do you think it is a positive or negative?
More and more
people
are attempting to find out their family history
in many parts of the world. This
essay will examine the causes of this
tendency. Personally, I think it is a positive development for a variety of reasons.
There are a variety of different causes for this
matter. To begin
with, people
want to research more information about the cultural roots of their family in the past. This
means that some people
have never heard from their parents about family history
such
as hometown, how many people
, jobs and achievements. For example
, last
week I researched about Nguyen family and discovered that the Nguyen Dynasty, the last
Feudal dynasty in Vietnam, existed for more than 143 years (1802-1945) with 13 generations of Nguyen kings. Another contributing cause to mention is that they want to save the traditional values of their ancestors. In fact, if we don't preserve something about our family traditions
, the next generation won’t know who we are and the values and traditions
disappear in the future.
There are some reasons why I think people
finding out about their family history
is a positive development. Firstly
, it can help their children understand the origin and culture of their ancestors. This
is because in modern society people
often forget about family values and when they research family history
, they have a chance to connect with other family members. Secondly
, they can be proud of achievements that is
ancestor achieved in the past and their children can learn more from them.
In conclusion, there are several reasons why a lot of people
nowadays would like to explore their family history
, which is mainly caused by the desire to maintain traditions
. In my opinion, I completely think that it is a positive development because it helps young people
care about family traditions
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