The diagram below shows how honey is made in small-scale commercial production. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The given diagram illustrates the process of

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production on a small scale in order to sell it in the market.

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it can be seen that there are two main phases involved in

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process, the first phase belongs to bees and the second one belongs to humans. The first phase starts when the

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bee tries to gather nectar

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the flower.

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depositing

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is conducted by these insects. When the

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has been dried by fan wings, the cells are kept clean of any infection and dirt. The human phase commands when humans seal cells with special equipment and clothes like wax. In what follows, the honeycombs are collected and pressed to

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into a basket or other practical containers.

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,

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is poured into a sump tank which has a 45 to 50c temperature. In the following stage,

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is placed in

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tank for almost 4 days, after which it is put into jars.

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,

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is delivered to the market to be consumed by citizens.