You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The charts below give information on the ages of the populations of Yemen and Italy in 2000 and projections for 2050. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
The pie chart depicts information on the ages of the demography of
Yemen
and Italy in 2000 and
predictions for a half of century in the period given
Overall
, the chart Add a missing verb
is separate
separate
into two categories between Replace the word
separated
Yemen
and Italy with three different ages from young residents
(0-14 years), young to adults (15-59 years), and elderly (60+ years).The number also
provide
in percentage.
In Wrong verb form
provided
the
2000, Change the article
apply
Yemen
are
mostly near in balance composition in terms of young and young Wrong verb form
was
adult
residents
with 50.1% young people and 46.3% young adult
respectively, and 3.6% elderly at the rest. It is opposed to Fix the agreement mistake
adults
Italy
population which predicted a sixth from the Change noun form
Italy's
others
age group with 61.6% young Correct quantifier usage
other
adult
citizens.
Regarding the projections for 2050, similarly
Add a comma
similarly,
Yemen
and Italy will be dominating
by young to Change the form of the verb
dominated
adult
residents
with each of them are
57.3% and 46.2%. But, Wrong verb form
being
for
the Change preposition
apply
others
age group look like Correct quantifier usage
other
contrast
with a third Correct subject-verb agreement
contrasts
young
Change preposition
of young
residents
percentage in Yemen
, it is conversely
with Italy with most elderly people mostly equal with
young age Change preposition
to
residents
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Basic structure: Use less body paragraphs.
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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
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Basic structure: Change the fifth paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words yemen, residents, adult with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fifth paragraph.
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