The diagram below shows how instant noodles are manufactured.

The diagram below shows how instant noodles are manufactured.
The given diagram shows the method by which instant noodles are manufactured.
Overall
, the operation can be
devided
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divided
into
einght
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eight
stages, starting with
the
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storing all the raw ingredients
to
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the silos and finishing with labelling and
sealling
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sealing
selling
the cups. The production begins when the flour to be used for making instant noodles is stored in
a cylindrical towers
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after being shipped by truck. After that, the flour
is send
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to a mixer,
then
blended
together with
a combination of water and oil. Once the dough has been perfectly blended, it
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come
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out through the rollers and
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formed
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into long dough sheets.
Subsequently
, these sheets are stripped by
factory
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machine into separate long pieces
dough
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. In the following stage, these strips are moulded into noodle discs which are ready for the deep frying process with coconut oil, and left
it
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to dry.
Next,
the noodles are
pack
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into different cups
along with
dry vegetables and secret spices. The process ends with labelling and sealing the packages, so the product will be ready for purchase.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • manufacturing process
  • mixing ingredients
  • dough preparation
  • sheeting
  • steaming
  • cutting techniques
  • dehydration
  • deep-frying
  • cooling system
  • packaging
  • quality control
  • production line
  • mass production
  • food preservation
  • convenience food
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