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The diagram below shows how instant noodles are manufactured.

The diagram below shows how instant noodles are manufactured.
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The given diagram shows the method by which instant noodles are manufactured.
Overall
, the operation can be
devided
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divided
 into
einght
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eight
 stages, starting with
the
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storing all the raw ingredients
to
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 the silos and finishing with labelling and
sealling
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sealing
selling
 the cups. The production begins when the flour to be used for making instant noodles is stored in
a cylindrical towers
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a cylindrical tower
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 after being shipped by truck. After that, the flour
is send
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 to a mixer,
then
 blended
together with
 a combination of water and oil. Once the dough has been perfectly blended, it
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come
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 out through the rollers and
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formed
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 into long dough sheets.
Subsequently
, these sheets are stripped by
factory
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 machine into separate long pieces
dough
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. In the following stage, these strips are moulded into noodle discs which are ready for the deep frying process with coconut oil, and left
it
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to dry.
Next,
the noodles are
pack
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packed
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 into different cups
along with
 dry vegetables and secret spices. The process ends with labelling and sealing the packages, so the product will be ready for purchase.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • manufacturing process
  • mixing ingredients
  • dough preparation
  • sheeting
  • steaming
  • cutting techniques
  • dehydration
  • deep-frying
  • cooling system
  • packaging
  • quality control
  • production line
  • mass production
  • food preservation
  • convenience food
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