The table shows the income and expenditure of Brooklyn Hall, the building used to hire in over the period of three years.
The table gives information about the total income and consumption of Brooklyn Hall in each place for 3 years.
Overall
, the profit of the hall has reduced in each year
significantly.Also
, the hire of rooms has the main amount of money in the period.
Firstly
, the hire of rooms had some small drop and rise but it can be considered steady. In contrast
,the cafe had a gradual increase. In addition
, the funding of
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for
council
tower was 20000 Correct article usage
the council
pounds
but it dropped to 15000 pound
. Change to a plural noun
pounds
On the other hand
, funding of bodies had the same situation and it had a fall from 22000 to 20000 pounds
in the second year
and in the third year
, it was 7000 pounds
less than the first year
.
Moreover
, the total income had a steady rise and started at 72000 and ended at 78000 pounds
. However
, the expenditure increased more, Therefore
the profit decreased in
every Change preposition
apply
year
and became 9 times less ( from 9000 to 1000 pounds
).Submitted by mohammad.bameri.1380 on
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Vocabulary: Replace the words year, pounds with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "rise" was used 2 times.
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