Some people believe that educational success depends on good teachers, while others believe that students’ attitudes are important. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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some people believe that

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academic

success

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depend

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on the competency of

teachers

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, others argue that it is

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to the

attitude

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of

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students

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teachers

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teacher's

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ability is critical for

students

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' educational

success

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,

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however

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student's

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attitude

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depended

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on the

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success

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good

teachers

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will

critical

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for the

students

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success

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argue that the teaching methods and

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commitment

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teachers

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influence

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the learning

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capacity

of the pupil.

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, a recent study

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the

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of Oxford indicated that

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student

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grades

are depend

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on the

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teachers

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influence

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the

students

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. The

students

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consider

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the teacher

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as

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their

role model and the

teacher

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behaviour will

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the

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student

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students

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performace

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performance

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, the

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students

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attitude

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is important for

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educational

success

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. It often

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observed

that the

student

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will not have

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mark in every subject which

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on the

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students

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interest and

attitude

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.

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, the

students

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will

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have higher marks in languages

are

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may have low score in mathematics which shows that the

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student

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student's

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attitude

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for

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the subject may vary which determine

thier

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their

educational score. In conclusion, the

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teachers

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abitlity

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ability

and competency

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on the

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students

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performance

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the

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students

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student's

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attitude

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is vital for

thier

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their

education

success

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.