The first chart below shows the results of a survey which sampled a cross-section of 100,000 people asking if they travelled abroad and why they travelled for the period 1994-98. The second chart shows their destinations over the same period.
The given table shows information about the proportion of people in the UK who
visit
abroad with purpose, while
the next table depicts their country of destination between the years 1994-1998.
Overall
, the number of British people visiting other countries appears to have increased gradually from 1994 to 1998. Most visitors travelled
abroad for Wrong verb form
travel
holiday
. Correct article usage
a holiday
Also
, more than 3000 inhabitants went forwork
purposes and to Correct your spelling
for work
visit
their friends and relatives. Nevertheless
, there was another reason to visit
foreign countries which were approximately 900 individuals. It is observed that the highest number of foreign visits was for holiday
in 1998 and the majority of these visitors went to Western Europe (24,519 individuals). Fix the agreement mistake
holidays
In addition
, the British preferred to visit
Western Europe and other regions more than North America.
To sum up
, referring to both tables, a huger
amount of British people went to Western Europe for a holiday, for business purposes and to Correct word choice
greater
visit
their friends and relatives between 1994-1998
.Correct word choice
and 1998
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