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It is important for travellers and business people to understand the cultures they come into contact with, however briefly. What are the main advantages of doing so? What do you think is the main disadvantage of doing so?

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Perception of the culture, when travelling abroad, is a powerful tool of communication.
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benefits
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the benefits
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 of understanding other
lifestyle
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lifestyles
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 and
drawbacks
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the drawbacks
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 of incomprehension.
Firstly
, it is
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 sensible to deny the importance of understanding a new culture.
In other words
, awareness of traditions and
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laws will help to both avoid violating local taboos and approach the local people's
life
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. Take
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 the Central Asian countries, it
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 for the course to champ
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 meal
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 since it is a sign of gratitude and deliciousness of the food.
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executives who want to run a successful business in another country should be aware of
trends
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 and interests of people in
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 country.
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, a person ignorant of the culture of Singapore is going to start importing soda and sweets, including chewing gum. He will not even be able to start his own business, since in Singapore chewing gum has been taboo
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 1992. Understanding different cultures, by and large, helps not only to make friends but
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traders in a foreign country. From my point of view, getting more information about other cultures in advance is an invaluable benefit for tourists.
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coherence cohesion
Your introduction should clearly present the topic and outline your position or approach to the question. Include a conclusion that summarizes the main points discussed and restates your position or findings.
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Support your main points with specific details and examples. This gives weight to your arguments and helps the reader understand your point of view more clearly. Avoid generalities that do not add substantial information to your essay.
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Address all parts of the task. Ensure that you provide a balanced view of the advantages and disadvantages mentioned in the prompt. Develop your ideas fully and demonstrate an understanding of the topic.
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Present clear and comprehensive ideas without overgeneralization. Aim for precision and clarity in your arguments, making sure each sentence contributes to the development of your essay.
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Use relevant and specific examples to support your ideas. These examples should be well-chosen to illustrate the point you're making. Make sure the examples are directly related to the cultural context discussed.

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