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The chart below shows the percentage of households owning four types of electronic devices between 1995 and 2015. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

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The line chart gives information about the proportion of households using 4 different devices
such
 as
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players
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player
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players
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, mobile
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phones
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phone
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phones
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,
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computers
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computer
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computers
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 and
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tablets
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tablet
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tablets
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 from 1990 and 2015.
Overall
,
percentage
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the percentage
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 of consumers who used
mp3
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MP3
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haven't
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 seen big growth,
additionally
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percentage
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the percentage
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 of all devices has seen only growth.
In
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 the beginning of the period,
mp3
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the mp3
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 player was the most used device, with
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 of about 15%,
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mobile phone and computer users were at the same level just under 10%. Cellphone users increased sharply between 1990 and 2000 and gradually
growing
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 it was
ont
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one
 of the most devices after 2000 and until the end of the given time.Computers which were equally consumed by mp3 players in 2000 , have increased in numbers and in 2015 it was the same as mobile phone consumers. Despite, the tablets started to be used after 2000, it has seen only rising and hit the peak with 80% of users
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 the end of the period. Another
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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
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Vocabulary: The word "gives" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "growth" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fifth paragraph.
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