The data provided in the table chart illustrates the amount of money allocated for the police by 3 types of sources, while the pie charts compare the information about the variety of money used in 2 years (2017-2018).

The data provided in the table chart illustrates the amount of money allocated for the police by 3 types of sources, while the pie charts compare the information about the variety of money used in 2 years (2017-2018).
The charts below show how much
money
was spent for 2017 and 2018. The following table chart shows that the national government is the largest funder for the
police
in both 2017 and 2018. In 2017, the total
amount
allocated for the
police
budget reached 304.7
million
euros
. For
this
result, the national government allocated 175.5
million
euros
, local taxes 91.2
million
euros
, and other sources 38
million
euros
. Now coming to the 2018
police
budget. In 2018, the total
amount
allocated to the
police
budget was 318.6
million
euros
. But
this
year's
amount
was almost the same as
last
year's
amount
. In 2017 and 2018, the most
money
was spent on the salaries of
police
officers and employees, and the
amount
was almost the same. In 2017, the percentage of
money
spent on employee salaries was 75%,
while
in 2018 it was slightly less than 69%. The percentage of another part of the
money
spent in 2017 and 2018, namely buildings and transport, was the same in both years (17%). And technology was the part that spent the least
amount
of
money
. In 2017, its percentage was 8
percent
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, and in 2018 it was 14
percent
Change the spelling
per cent
show examples
, slightly more than
last
year.
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