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The data provided in the table chart illustrates the amount of money allocated for the police by 3 types of sources, while the pie charts compare the information about the variety of money used in 2 years (2017-2018).

The data provided in the table chart illustrates the amount of money allocated for the police by 3 types of sources, while the pie charts compare the information about the variety of money used in 2 years (2017-2018).
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The charts below show how much
money
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 was spent for 2017 and 2018. The following table chart shows that the national government is the largest funder for the
police
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 in both 2017 and 2018. In 2017, the total
amount
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 allocated for the
police
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 budget reached 304.7
million
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euros
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. For
this
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 result, the national government allocated 175.5
million
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euros
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, local taxes 91.2
million
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euros
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, and other sources 38
million
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euros
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. Now coming to the 2018
police
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 budget. In 2018, the total
amount
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 allocated to the
police
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 budget was 318.6
million
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euros
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. But
this
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 year's
amount
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 was almost the same as
last
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 year's
amount
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. In 2017 and 2018, the most
money
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 was spent on the salaries of
police
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 officers and employees, and the
amount
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 was almost the same. In 2017, the percentage of
money
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 spent on employee salaries was 75%,
while
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 in 2018 it was slightly less than 69%. The percentage of another part of the
money
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 spent in 2017 and 2018, namely buildings and transport, was the same in both years (17%). And technology was the part that spent the least
amount
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 of
money
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. In 2017, its percentage was 8
percent
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per cent
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, and in 2018 it was 14
percent
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per cent
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, slightly more than
last
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 year.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "last".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words money, police, amount, million, euros with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "charts" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "show" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 6 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "slightly" was used 2 times.
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