You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The charts shows air pollution levels by different causes among four countries in 2021. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.
The given bar diagram represents the developing countries and their
pollution
Use synonyms
level
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also
the bars in the chart differ and illustrate the causes Linking Words
for
Change preposition
of
pollution
. (electricity generation, Transport, Industry)
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While
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China
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produce
nearly 60% of Change the verb form
produces
pollution
by transport, no other Use synonyms
countries
produces like that. Fix the agreement mistake
country
Australia
produces very Use synonyms
less
Correct word choice
little
pollution
. Use synonyms
China
produced industrious Use synonyms
pollution
nearly two times more than Japan and four times more than Use synonyms
Australia
Japan managed to have the least Use synonyms
PPM
amount given in the charts less than one-third of Use synonyms
China
's 60 Use synonyms
PPM
for electricity generation.
Japan's Use synonyms
PPM
levels by transport equals Use synonyms
to
the Change preposition
apply
PPM
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level
of America's electrical and industrial cause. Use synonyms
Australia
's Use synonyms
PPM
Use synonyms
level
is lesser than all other Use synonyms
countries
Change noun form
countries'
country's
PPM
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level
. Fix the agreement mistake
levels
Whereas
, America's transportation factor is nearly as much as Linking Words
China
's electricity at about 60 Use synonyms
PPM
.
To summarize, at the bottom of the data Use synonyms
Australia
's whole Use synonyms
pollution
is less than a third of Use synonyms
China
which is the biggest polluter with Use synonyms
pollution
rounding of about 250PPM total.Use synonyms
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Vocabulary: Replace the words pollution, level, china, australia, ppm with synonyms.
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