The graph below shows the proportion of the population aged 65 and over between 1940 and 2040 in three different countries.
The line graph illustrates the amount of
the
individuals aged 65 and over in the USA, Correct article usage
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Sweden
and Japan during the 83 years from 1940 and also
gives prediction
till 2040.
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a prediction
Overall
, it can be seen that the proportion of population
aged 65 and over will Add an article
the population
have been
decrease in all countries. In Verb problem
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the
1940, the American older people Change the article
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numbers
higher than Verb problem
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other
regions and the proportion Change preposition
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10%, almost 7% and 5% in Verb problem
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USA
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the USA
Sweden
and Japan respectively. The rate of aged 65 and over had increased during the 20 years except Japan’s older individuals. Nearly in 1985, the USA and Sweden
elder people’s rate had decreased until almost 1995. Since 1995, the percentage of the Sweden
population aged 65 and over peaked up sharply till 2015. It is expected to be doubled and reach nearly 25% in 2040.
In contrast
, the aged population in Japan remained the lowest, which was less than 5% until 2005 and expected
to grow and reach the highest point, about 30 percentage, in 2040.Add a missing verb
is expected
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