The diagram below show the change that have taken place ar queen mary hospital since its construction in 1960.
The maps illustrate the changes in Queen Mary Hospital in three different years, since it was built in 1960,1980, and
then
2000
.
Change preposition
in 2000
Overall
, there is an obvious change in the west
of the maps, in contrast
, in the east of the map there is a small change in the periods given.
Beginning with the West
, in the year 1960, there was a farmland behaind
the shopping Correct your spelling
behind
centre
and then
they both were replaced with a cancer centre
, pharmacy in the North West
, and nursing school Change preposition
in South
South
Correct your spelling
the west
West
in 1980, but in 2000, the cancer centre
expanded and took the place of the nursing school which is disappeared.
Turning to the East, there was not any change in the hospital place in the 3 years .Similarly
, the car park where
Rephrase
apply
it
was behind the hospital, but in 2000 it became smaller and the nursing school took place between it and the cancer Correct pronoun usage
apply
centre
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words west, centre with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "maps" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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