The tables below give information about sales of Fairtrade-labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five Europen countries

The tables below give information about sales of Fairtrade-labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five Europen countries
The table illustrates the number of facts about five European countries (Great Britain, Denmark, Switzerland, Belgium,
Sweden
) in which
coffee
and bananas
labeled
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Fairtrade were sold in 1999 and 2004. Units of measurement are measured in millions of euros. In general, all countries showed good demand.
However
, there is a regression in banana
sales
in the two countries.
In addition
,
sales
of bananas
labeled
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Fairtrade were more popular than
coffee
with the same label. First of all, the UK became the leader in
coffee
production, which showed an increase of about 18
million
from 1.5
million
to 20
million
, and the index showed that
Sweden
accounted for about only 0.2
million
from 0.8
million
to 1
million
. It's the same with
Sweden
, Denmark changed by 0.2
million
, starting with 1.8
million
and ending with 2
million
. Switzerland shows the highest result in two types of products, in 1999 it was 15
million
, after which the number gradually jumped to 47
million
in 2004.
In addition
, reasonable statistics showed that in Denmark in 1999 it was 2
million
euros, and in 2004 it fell sharply to 0.9
million
euros.
Moreover
,
sales
of Fairtrade-branded
coffee
in Switzerland increased by 3
million
,
as well as
in Belgium, but there they reached a maximum of 1.7
million
.
In addition
, additional
sales
of bananas
labeled
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labelled
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Fairtrade in the UK and Belgium increased to 5.5 and 4
million
, respectively. When in
Sweden
, that number dropped dramatically from 1.8
million
to 1
million
.
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