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The tables below give information about sales of Fairtrade-labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five Europen countries

The tables below give information about sales of Fairtrade-labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five Europen countries
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The table illustrates the number of facts about five European countries (Great Britain, Denmark, Switzerland, Belgium,
Sweden
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) in which
coffee
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 and bananas
labeled
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 Fairtrade were sold in 1999 and 2004. Units of measurement are measured in millions of euros. In general, all countries showed good demand.
However
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, there is a regression in banana
sales
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 in the two countries.
In addition
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,
sales
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 of bananas
labeled
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 Fairtrade were more popular than
coffee
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 with the same label. First of all, the UK became the leader in
coffee
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 production, which showed an increase of about 18
million
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 from 1.5
million
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 to 20
million
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, and the index showed that
Sweden
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 accounted for about only 0.2
million
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 from 0.8
million
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 to 1
million
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. It's the same with
Sweden
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, Denmark changed by 0.2
million
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, starting with 1.8
million
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 and ending with 2
million
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. Switzerland shows the highest result in two types of products, in 1999 it was 15
million
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, after which the number gradually jumped to 47
million
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 in 2004.
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, reasonable statistics showed that in Denmark in 1999 it was 2
million
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 euros, and in 2004 it fell sharply to 0.9
million
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 euros.
Moreover
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,
sales
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 of Fairtrade-branded
coffee
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 in Switzerland increased by 3
million
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,
as well as
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 in Belgium, but there they reached a maximum of 1.7
million
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.
In addition
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, additional
sales
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 of bananas
labeled
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labelled
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 Fairtrade in the UK and Belgium increased to 5.5 and 4
million
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, respectively. When in
Sweden
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, that number dropped dramatically from 1.8
million
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 to 1
million
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.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "in addition".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words sweden, coffee, sales, million with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "showed" was used 5 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 3 times.
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