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Some people say that physical money will no longer be used in the future. However, others believe it will remain in use. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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In some people's opinion cash and coins will soon die out,
whereas
 others think that physical
money
 will
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 to
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. Honestly, I'm in
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 of
first
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 view and I will prove it in upcoming paragraphs. The first reason why I think physical
money
 will go out of
use
 is that making
a
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paper
money
 is quite difficult,
but
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it is easy to print
the
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 fake version of it and it seems like the original one until you check it carefully, but if you have a big amount of
money
, it is impossible to look through every single
money
. So you may be cheated by swindlers.
Moreover
, If you have
money
 in your pocket, there's a potential risk of dropping it somewhere. I went through
once
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such
an
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occasion. It must have been 2 years ago
while
 I was walking in the park. I dropped my wallet which included $300 and my calling card. I was saving
money
 for my mother's
bithday
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birthday
 so it was very bad for me to
loose
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 it. Fortunately, two days later, someone connected me and said that he
has
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had
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found a black
laeather
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leather
 wallet and
he's
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he was
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 going to give it back. The next day I took it from him and determined to keep my
money
 in my debit card in order to avoid
such
 misfortunes. In my
opinion
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 using digital
money
 is the best way to keep your
money
 secure.
Also
, it is convenient,
easy
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and easy
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 to
use
 and why acceptance because you can control it and share it
by
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 your phone and no one can
use
 it without your permission. In conclusion, it is likely that physical
money
 Someday in the future will go out of
use
 because digital
money
 is becoming more and more popular among people from all over the world.
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