Some people say that physical money will no longer be used in the future. However, others believe it will remain in use. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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In some people's opinion cash and coins will soon die out,
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others think that physical
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will
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to
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use
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. Honestly, I'm in
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of
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view and I will prove it in upcoming paragraphs. The first reason why I think physical
money
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will go out of
use
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is that making
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paper
money
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is quite difficult,
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it is easy to print
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fake version of it and it seems like the original one until you check it carefully, but if you have a big amount of
money
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, it is impossible to look through every single
money
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. So you may be cheated by swindlers.
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, If you have
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in your pocket, there's a potential risk of dropping it somewhere. I went through
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an
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occasion. It must have been 2 years ago
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I was walking in the park. I dropped my wallet which included $300 and my calling card. I was saving
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for my mother's
bithday
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birthday
so it was very bad for me to
loose
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it. Fortunately, two days later, someone connected me and said that he
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found a black
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leather
wallet and
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going to give it back. The next day I took it from him and determined to keep my
money
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in my debit card in order to avoid
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misfortunes. In my
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using digital
money
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is the best way to keep your
money
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secure.
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, it is convenient,
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and easy
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to
use
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and why acceptance because you can control it and share it
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your phone and no one can
use
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it without your permission. In conclusion, it is likely that physical
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Someday in the future will go out of
use
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because digital
money
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is becoming more and more popular among people from all over the world.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • financial security
  • safety net
  • unforeseen circumstances
  • emergencies
  • future investments
  • retirement planning
  • financial discipline
  • habit of saving
  • amassing wealth
  • substantial fund
  • opportunity cost
  • additional income
  • inflation
  • purchasing power
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