The charts below provide the primary reason tourists visited Orange City in two different years. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar charts provide information on the key
reason
that drive Fix the agreement mistake
reasons
tuourists
to visit Orage City Correct your spelling
tourists
at
periods of two years.
Change preposition
for
Overall
, it appears the sporting Events is
the Correct subject-verb agreement
are
mejor
Correct your spelling
major
tourists
attraction, Change the noun form
tourist
while
theater
is the less attraction.
With regard to the athletic events, the number of Change the spelling
theatre
the
people visiting the city in 2017 was slightly less than 150000 . In 2020 Correct article usage
apply
the
that number had increased to approximately 150000, and Remove the article
apply
in
predicted to rise to more than that.
Correct your spelling
is
However
, in 2017 and 2020 the number of the
theater attendance was significantly lower than 50000, Correct article usage
apply
whereas
in predicted to grow to nearly 50000 in 2030. Bisides
, the concert audience in 2017 Correct your spelling
Besides
along with
2020 was almost 25000. Netherthe
less, it will rapidly increase to over 100000 in 2030.Correct your spelling
Nether the
Neither the
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