Some children spend hours every day on their smartphones. Why is this case? Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?

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technology phase,

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young individuals

undoubtly

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undoubtedly

hanging

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on

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the addiction

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using mobile phones on

their

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daily basis. The contentment of

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this

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gadgets

due to

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users

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excessive

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without prohibition and the impact of

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technological

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sophisticated applications

containts

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contents

in those

appealling

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devices I believe

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nuance could bring some drawbacks in

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term

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of development for

children

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with

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several reasons namely health issues and isolation. First and foremost, the

time

restriction that could be set by parents with regulation, sometimes

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not strict in a house when father and mother are full-

time

workers.

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unconciously

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unconsciously

become

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the reason the

children

have over-consumed with smartphones. They are lost in

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and the tools that should be something could be

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if

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wisely,

shift

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into a negative tonic for

children

almost whole days. The other concern appears when

variety

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of applications inside the smartphones

are

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too mesmerizing for

children

to

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survey

and

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without realizing

that

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consequences that come after.

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, like two sides of a coin,

this

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habits

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of

over used

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gadgets

undenibly

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undeniably

lead to

health

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matter

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. Eye constraints, lack of sleep and

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dependency

over

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handphones are some issues

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resulted

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from

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addiction.

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, their

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of development could left meaningless for the reason that there is no room at all for learning valuable lessons from nature, books, or

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spending

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doing their practical chores at houses.

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for

this

condition

come

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from the sense of isolation. when

children

mainly

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stuck

at

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their

chamber

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, allocating most of their

time

dealt with mobile phones. They will capture themselves in an isolated phase in an isolated phase without having real communication even physical touch like hugging from family that actually

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actually really beneficial for their

pshysical-emotional

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physical-emotional

development. All in all,

children

nowadays

have spent

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a lot of their

time

on

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playing with gadgets.

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is an action that not only bring

down

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their body health

into

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problem but

also

their sense of belonging in

community

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or family can be categorize diminish. The problem

rooted

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from

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lack

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of

restriction

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or

regulation

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at

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the

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working families.

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be

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hinder the flaws

effects

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mentioned above.