The chart below shows the expenditure of 2 countries on consumer goods in 2010.
The bar chart compares the amount of
money
spent on five various types of consumer
goods
such
as cars, computers, books, perfume and cameras in France and the UK
in 2010. Units are measured as pounds sterling.
In
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Overall
overall
, it clearly
apparent that the Add a missing verb
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UK
spent much more money
for
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on
consumer
goods
rather
than France for the given period. Both The Rephrase
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UK
and France spent the most of their money
on cars and the least amount of the
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money
spending
on perfume respectively.
In terms of cars, the population of the Replace the word
spent
UK
spent about 450k punds
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pounds
this
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these
consumer
goods
and about 400k to
French . Change preposition
on
Similarly
, the British expenditure was lower on the books than the French, 400k and 350k in
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, the
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spending to
books was the second most spending area for the Change preposition
on
UK
population. By contrast
, French
population spent less than 100k Correct article usage
the French
for
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on
this
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these consumer goods
consumer
goods
respectively.
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the other
consumer
goods
, such
as perfume and cameras, the amount of money
spending
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French
and another side The Correct article usage
the French
UK
made
more spending for Verb problem
spent
camera
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cameras
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