The diagram describes how to grow and make pineapple products.
The diagram describes how to grow and make
pineapple
products.
Overall
, it takes about 1 year for most pineapples to reach maturity. As can be seen, most of them are undergone
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by
different care that depends on Change preposition
apply
sizes
and aim of Fix the agreement mistake
size
using
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The first stage begins when pineapples are grown in Replace the word
use
suitable
environment which is enough light and warm temperature ( 28_30 degrees) . Each Add an article
a suitable
pineapple
is planted 26cm apart from each other . After 7 months , they are added chemicals for better treatments. Then
, pineapples need for
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apply
5
months to be harvested .They can reach 2kg weight and 30cm height per Change preposition
than 5
pineapple
for yield crops . Finally
, they are washed and depend on cases that they are cut or peeled , then
extracted by smoothie makers to make pineapple
juice , or cut into small slices and put in the
box or kept in baskets and transported in different usages.Correct article usage
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