The graph below shows different sources of air pollutants in the UK from 1990 to 2005.

The line graph illustrates information about three various types of resources which took part in the

air

pollution

process in the UK over the given 15-

year

time period, between 1990 and 2005. Units are measured in

million

tonnes

.

Overall

, in terms of atmosphere toxic waste, the industry experienced the highest proportion of

this

process

while

households and transport

were

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stayed

at

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below 2

million

tonnes

of

air

pollutants given the

15-yearyear

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15-year year

15-year-year

time zone. Both 3 different types of

air

pollution

resources declined dramatically from 1990 to 2005

year

, respectively. On the one hand, the amount of

pollution

by industry resources

was seen

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a sharp decrease till

the

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1999

year

, with approximately 3

million

tonnes

of

pollution

. After 6 years,

this

figure stayed at 4

million

tonnes

till 2002,

then

it went down slightly.

On the other hand

, the transport consumption fluctuated in the same range ,

such

as 1.5 and 2

million

tonnes

of

air

pollutants during the whole

year

period. Turning to household figures, for the first 9 years, the amount of

pollution

measured in the same stage,

while

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it

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fell to

0.5

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approximately 0.5

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million

tonnes

of

air

pollutants, approximately. Following

this

, the total

air

pollution

accounted for a sharp decrease in terms of

million

tonnes

, over 15

year

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15-year

period.