You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The diagram below shows how to recycle organic waste to produce garden fertilizer (compost). Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words. Writing Task 1

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The diagram below shows how to recycle organic waste to produce garden fertilizer (compost).

Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

You should write at least 150 words.

Writing Task 1
This
diagram illustrates
fives
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five
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steps of recycling organic
waste
( like newspapers, grass and food ) to produce a final product :
a
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apply
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compost ( garden fertilizer).
Overall
, the whole process takes place in a huge plastic container of 2 m3
size
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and contains 4 openings that leak air out.
Secondly
, the process starts by preparing the container with 2
layes
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layers
of food and grass and
second
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layer of newspaper located at the bottom, each is of 15 cm thick.
Then
organic
waste
is added to the whole mix. After that, two important ingredients are added , hot water and Nitrogen to the mixture. The Fourth step is very crucial. liquids that were added are allowed to interact with the organic
waste
paste for a fair time of six months. The plastic jar must be sealed
while
the interaction happens , allowing the vapour produced to leave through the openings located on the sides. After 6 months of
chemicals
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interaction
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the seal is removed and the final product is ready , giving a garden fertilizer ( compost ), that was completely recycled from basic organic
waste
.
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words waste with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 2 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • recycle
  • organic waste
  • garden fertilizer
  • compost
  • diagram
  • main features
  • comparisons
  • overview
  • collection
  • shredding
  • mixing
  • addition
  • water
  • bacteria
  • turning
  • aerating
  • pile
  • maturation
  • filtering
  • final product
  • before and after
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