The graph below shows the changes in the maximum number of Asian elephants between 1997 and 2004. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

The graph above illustrates the estimated numbers of Asian elephants population in nine

asian

Change the capitalization

Asian

show examples

countries from 1997 to 2004. In general, it can be seen that the

mammals

Correct quantifier usage

number of mammals

show examples

were

Unnecessary verb

apply

show examples

unfortunately decreased almost in all

region

Fix the agreement mistake

regions

show examples

during that time period. India and Malaysia were the

country

Change the noun form

countries

show examples

with

biggest

Correct article usage

the biggest

show examples

dropped percentage,

while

Cambodia and Laos showed a positive trend of growth. In 1997, the number of

elephant

Change to a plural noun

elephants

show examples

lived

Wrong verb form

living

show examples

in India recorded

in

Change preposition

apply

show examples

almost 10000 creatures, but the number dropped

more

Change preposition

by more

show examples

than 25% to less than 7500 in 2004. The same trend can

also

be seen in Malaysia where previously there

was

Correct subject-verb agreement

were

show examples

almost 3000 in 1997 and decreased

almost

Change preposition

by almost

show examples

70% with only 1000 by the end of the period. Some good trends can be seen

on

Change preposition

in

show examples

the growth of the elephants

live

Wrong verb form

living

show examples

in Cambodia and

also

Rephrase

apply

show examples

Laos. Even though the growth was not that big, it showed that the mammals were able to live well and reproduce in those two countries.