The graphs below give information about computer ownership as a percentage of the population between 2002 and 2010, and by level of education for the years 2002 and 2010. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words. (20 mins.)
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The bar charts illustrate the proportion of
computer
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ownership
of the residents from 2002 to 2010, by group of Use synonyms
education
for the years 2002 and 2010.
Looking from an Use synonyms
overall
perspective, the Linking Words
percentage
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computer
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ownership
of the population experienced an upward trend over the period, consistent with the Use synonyms
computer
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ownership
by Use synonyms
education
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level
graph that shows Use synonyms
computer
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ownership
ratio increased from 2002 to 2010 and the proportion of Use synonyms
education
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level
was directly proportional to the Use synonyms
percentage
of Use synonyms
computer
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ownership
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level
.
The Use synonyms
percentage
of Use synonyms
overall
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computer
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ownership
rose steadily from above 50% to around 75% from 2002 to 2010. Use synonyms
However
, the increases are different for each Linking Words
level
of population Use synonyms
education
.
There are 3 groups that the Use synonyms
percentage
of Use synonyms
overall
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computer
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ownership
are at low to medium Use synonyms
level
in 2002, including: no high school diploma, high school graduate, and college (incomplete), which grew significantly until 2010, Use synonyms
while
highly educated groups, including: bachelor’s degree and postgraduate certification, rose moderately.Linking Words
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Vocabulary: Replace the words computer, ownership, education, percentage, level with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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