The graphs below give information about computer ownership as a percentage of the population between 2002 and 2010, and by level of education for the years 2002 and 2010. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words. (20 mins.)
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The bar charts illustrate the proportion of
computer
ownership
of the residents from 2002 to 2010, by group of education
for the years 2002 and 2010.
Looking from an overall
perspective, the percentage
of computer
ownership
of the population experienced an upward trend over the period, consistent with the computer
ownership
by education
level
graph that shows computer
ownership
ratio increased from 2002 to 2010 and the proportion of education
level
was directly proportional to the percentage
of computer
ownership
level
.
The percentage
of overall
computer
ownership
rose steadily from above 50% to around 75% from 2002 to 2010. However
, the increases are different for each level
of population education
.
There are 3 groups that the percentage
of overall
computer
ownership
are at low to medium level
in 2002, including: no high school diploma, high school graduate, and college (incomplete), which grew significantly until 2010, while
highly educated groups, including: bachelor’s degree and postgraduate certification, rose moderately.Submitted by writersdiary101 on
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