As the result of tourisms and the incresing number of people traveling, there's an growingh demand for more flights. What problems does it have on the enviroment? What measures could be taken to solve the problem?

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love to travel more

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else by

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, which is one of the

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the

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frequency of using plane experience a significant increase. In

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the environment and propose some

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to deal with the issue.

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the airplane

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airplane

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is the most convenient, safe and less

time consuming

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of

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transportation for holiday.

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those its superiority follow

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several factor that make

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vehicle not eco-friendly and

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an indirect harmful impact.

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airplane

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fossil

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fuels

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which produce

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of air

pollutions

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pollution

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to climate change. To illustrate, every

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to

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the sky could

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a thousand tons of CO2 and

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gas will absorb the warmth of the sun and

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on

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it.

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CO2 could increase the temperature of our atmosphere, which is can make our earth more hotter and

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ocean biodiversity because the water getting warmer.

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some

sollutions

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issue before getting worse.

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actions only can be done by

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a country

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country

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solid commitment to reducing

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emissions

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our planet.

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commonly used by developed countries

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decarbonisation.

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an incentive and

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who

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can cut or surpass the

carbon

production threshold

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determined

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by

government

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the government

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. From

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a company

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company

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perspective, the action that can be taken is

using

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eco-friendly fuel for

airplane

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.

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2023

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this ideas

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company

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can push down their

carbon

emission can get a

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credit and trade in

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maket

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market

.

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the

company

will get additional income

form

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other

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not comply with the limit. In

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, increasing demand

of

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flight

schedule

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could impact

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our nature because it can contribute to the rising of

carbon

gas in the air.

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essay suggested that the

solutions

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to

this

problem

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carbon

pricing and

reducing

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the fossil-based fuel.