the diagram show the cycle of a species of large fish called the salmon

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salmon

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as a species of large

fish

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.

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, it reveals that there are four distinct stages in the process, and it shows they occur in freshwater and saline water with different

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. In the initial stage,

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eggs are situated in the upper river underneath small stones and reeds where the water flow is slow. It took around 5-6 months to wait until the eggs

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hatched to become small

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. After that, those small

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called fry that length

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3-8 cm travelled to the fast

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river and spent approximately 4 years before ready to move to the open sea. In the subsequent stage, the growing

fish

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smolt

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12-15cm long entered the ocean and used about five years

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to stay before becoming the adult

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70-76 cm long. By reaching

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stage, the

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turned back to the upper river to transfer their eggs.