The diagram below shows the life cycle of the honey bee. Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below.
This
diagram depicts the life cycle of the honey bee
which starts from egg to being whole bee
.
It is clear from the diagram that the bee
undergoes six phases to reach maturity.
According to
what is shown bee
’s female put about one to two eggs
each three days
. After that, the eggs
get hatched and the little bee
could
be seen around 15 Wrong verb form
can
days
after the mother lays the eggs
. Then
, and
before they have the ability to move nearly, they Correct word choice
apply
passes
through two phases of growth which take about 16 Change the verb form
pass
days
. Bees become young adults as preparing step
before they Fix the agreement mistake
steps
being
mature and have the ability to put another egg’s generation.
Verb problem
become
To sum up
, we could say that, bees takes
roughly 34 to 36 Change the verb form
take
days
to be able to laying
Change the verb
lay
eggs
and can extract the honey from flowers.Submitted by abdullazizalajlan.m on
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