The diagram below shows the life cycle of the honey bee. Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below.

The diagram below shows the life cycle of the honey bee.

Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below.
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This
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diagram depicts the life cycle of the honey
bee
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which starts from egg to being whole
bee
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. It is clear from the diagram that the
bee
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undergoes six phases to reach maturity.
According to
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what is shown
bee
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’s female put about one to two
eggs
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each three
days
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. After that, the
eggs
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get hatched and the little
bee
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could
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be seen around 15
days
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after the mother lays the
eggs
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.
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,
and
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before they have the ability to move nearly, they
passes
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through two phases of growth which take about 16
days
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. Bees become young adults as preparing
step
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before they
being
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become
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mature and have the ability to put another egg’s generation.
To sum up
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, we could say that, bees
takes
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roughly 34 to 36
days
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to be able to
laying
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lay
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eggs
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and can extract the honey from flowers.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 67%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words bee, eggs, days with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "diagram" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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