The chart shows the average daily viewing figures for Channel One News over a 12-month period.

The chart shows the average daily viewing figures for Channel One News over a 12-month period.
The line graph illustrates the rate of
every day
Correct your spelling
everyday
show examples
watching numbers for
Cannel
Correct your spelling
Channel
show examples
One News between January and December, measured by millions.
Overall
, the significant features in the chart are; the number of 6
pm
is the highest,
while
the lowest in
the
Correct article usage
apply
show examples
most of the period given. In
the
Correct article usage
apply
show examples
May, the millions of 9:30
pm
is higher than 11
pm
. But in July, 11
pm
(around 4.1
million
)
becomes
Wrong verb form
became
show examples
more than 9:30
pm
(almost 2 millions) . As regards to 6
pm
this
trend reaches its peak at about 5
million
in the first month of the year,
whereas
in August, it is the lowest point at nearly 4
million
. In March,
in addition
, the rate of 6
pm
is much more than 1
pm
at approximately 4
million
and around 1.5
million
, respectively. The average of 9:30
pm
and 6
pm
is very similar in Cannel One News at almost 3.99
million
and 4
million
.
Submitted by Memmm on

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Vocabulary: Replace the words pm, million with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • average daily viewing figures
  • trend analysis
  • seasonal variation
  • monthly fluctuation
  • viewership
  • peak periods
  • audience engagement
  • broadcasting schedule
  • target demographics
  • ratings
  • news consumption
  • viewer retention
  • broadcast analytics
  • market competition
  • programming changes
  • news coverage
  • media influence
What to do next:
Look at other essays: