Your Overseas friend has invited you to visit his country. You are planning to visit him. Write a letter to your friend, In your letter. •Thank him for the invitation & accept the invitation. •Write detail about your visit. •Briefly describe what you want to do there
Dear Jee,
I hope
this
letter finds you well. I am writing this
letter very happy. I got your invitation mail and conformation latter. After seen
Wrong verb form
seeing
Correct article usage
the mail
mail
I feel really good.
Add a comma
mail,
Firstly
, thank Jee your
invitation. I accepted your call.I did not have any Add the preposition
for your
expectation
about visiting your country. But, After your mail came, I changed my plan.Fix the agreement mistake
expectations
this days
I am ready to come to your home. I Change the determiner
this day
these days
planed
to come after next Correct your spelling
planned
week
. Because I have important
meeting coming Add an article
an important
week
. So after finishing that I will come to UK
.
Correct article usage
the UK
Furthermore
, I will come to the UK
next week
Sunday morning flight. Because,
I think that day you will be free. So I will arrive around evening 6.30. And I want some help from you. I do not know Remove the comma
apply
UK
town. I have a meeting in Correct article usage
a UK
UK
town. So can you arrange the room in Correct article usage
a UK
UK
city.
If you ok, Change the punctuation
?
then
let me know before coming week
.
I will see you very soon and I am waiting
your reply dear.
Faithfully,
MathuAdd the preposition
waiting for
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coherence cohesion
Ensure that each paragraph presents a clear and distinct idea or point. The paragraphs in the letter are somewhat disorganized and could be more focused on specific topics.
task achievement
Develop a more suitable and consistent writing tone for a semi-formal letter. The tone in this letter fluctuates and lacks the semi-formal quality appropriate for writing to a friend about a visit.
task achievement
Include specific information and fully develop your ideas. Expand upon the details of your visit and what you intend to do while in your friend's country.
coherence cohesion
Consider adopting a clear organizational structure, starting with a greeting, followed by clear paragraphs for each main point, and ending with a suitable closing.
The Closing
The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.
Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.
Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)
- Yours faithfully,
Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)
- Yours sincerely,
Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)
- Best regards,
- Warm wishes,
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