The plans below show the site of an airport now and how it will look after redevelopment next year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Two maps
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the plans of the southwest airport, one of them
is showing
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how
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it looks like
in
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this
time,
while
the other indicates how it will
bw
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be
after developments after a year. In general, the site will be bigger in the future and some features will be added all around it.
According to
the diagram, the
departures
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and
arrivals
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doors are going to be doubled in the future, and there will be
a cafes
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added in the
right
salon.
Moreover
, a car hire
center
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and an ATM are going to be built in the
right
corner of
arrivals
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hall
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is almost empty now. The check-in
part
will be transferred to the
right
side of the
departures
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hall where is a café
in
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this
time, and the café is going to be at the left corner next to
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interance
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entrance
. One thing that will be added to the departure section, is a bag drop
part
that will be
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the left side, where the check-in is now placed.
Additionally
, the passport control
part
will be unchanged.
However
, in the next section, some shops will be added in the
right
part
. But the most noticeable change will be in the
northen
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northern
part
of the airport, the walkways are going to be exchanged with sky trains,
and
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the area will be extended and a two-way will be built.
Overall
, some facilities will be added and the area will be
spaceous
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spacious
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coherence cohesion
Ensure clear paragraphing to separate introduction, overview, body, and conclusion. Use a wider range of linking words and phrases to improve cohesion.
task achievement
Provide an overview that summarizes the main trends, differences or stages without including specific detail.
coherence cohesion
Develop paragraphs with a clear central topic and provide specific details to support your comparisons.
task achievement
Cover all parts of the task sufficiently. Ensure you compare and contrast all the main features as the task requires.

Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • infrastructure
  • terminal
  • runway
  • refurbishment
  • redevelopment
  • amenities
  • car park
  • hangar
  • concourse
  • public transport hub
  • access roads
  • boarding gates
  • check-in desk
  • baggage claim
  • departure lounge
  • observation deck
  • duty-free shopping
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