The plans below show the site of an airport now and how it will look after redevelopment next year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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Two maps

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the plans of the southwest airport, one of them

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how

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it looks like

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this

time,

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the other indicates how it will

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after developments after a year. In general, the site will be bigger in the future and some features will be added all around it.

According to

the diagram, the

departures

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and

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doors are going to be doubled in the future, and there will be

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added in the

right

salon.

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, a car hire

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and an ATM are going to be built in the

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hall

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is almost empty now. The check-in

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hall where is a café

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this

time, and the café is going to be at the left corner next to

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interance

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entrance

. One thing that will be added to the departure section, is a bag drop

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the left side, where the check-in is now placed.

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, the passport control

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will be unchanged.

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, in the next section, some shops will be added in the

right

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. But the most noticeable change will be in the

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northern

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of the airport, the walkways are going to be exchanged with sky trains,

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the area will be extended and a two-way will be built.

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, some facilities will be added and the area will be

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spacious

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coherence cohesion

Ensure clear paragraphing to separate introduction, overview, body, and conclusion. Use a wider range of linking words and phrases to improve cohesion.

task achievement

Provide an overview that summarizes the main trends, differences or stages without including specific detail.

coherence cohesion

Develop paragraphs with a clear central topic and provide specific details to support your comparisons.

task achievement

Cover all parts of the task sufficiently. Ensure you compare and contrast all the main features as the task requires.

Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

Summary
Restatement of thesis
Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

In conclusion
To conclude
To summarize
Finally
In a nutshell
In general

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8Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
2Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
19Grammar mistakes
 

3 paragraphs

240 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

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infrastructure
terminal
runway
refurbishment
redevelopment
amenities
car park
hangar
concourse
public transport hub
access roads
boarding gates
check-in desk
baggage claim
departure lounge
observation deck
duty-free shopping

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The plans below show the site of an airport now and how it will look after redevelopment next year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Include an introduction and conclusion

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Robots and artificial intelligence are being developed to replace humans in the workplace. Why is this happening ?. Do you think will have a positive of negative impact on society?

Some students take one year off between finishing school and going to university, in order to travel or to have an experience from works. Do you think advantage outweigh disadvantages