The chart below shows the average hours spent per day in leisure and sports activities by youngest and oldest populations in the US in 2015.
The given bar chart describes the average hours of people who , are about 15 - 19 and 76 and over, consumed their each day for different types of leisure and
sport
activities in the year 2015 in the United States of America. Units are measured in hours.
Change the noun form
sports
Overall
, it is clear that the oldest and youngest population of the US spent most of their time on
watching TV , Change preposition
apply
while
the former spent their
less time on Correct pronoun usage
apply
sport
, exercise and relaxation , and the latter Fix the agreement mistake
sports
ones did
it Verb problem
spent
on
relaxing and thinking.
Looking at the information in more detail , the people who are 75 and Change preposition
apply
over spent
nearly 4.5 hours ,which was Correct your spelling
overspent
most
, on watching TV per day , Correct article usage
the most
whereas
the figures for the ones
who are 15-19 were under 2.5 .
As far as the next details are concerned, in terms of three details ,which are Watching TV , Reading, Relaxing , thinking
, the oldest Correct word choice
and thinking
ones
had the advantage over the youngest ones
. However
, the latter ones
had the advantage over those in terms of socializing , communicating, playing games , doing Correct pronoun usage
apply
sport
exercise and Fix the agreement mistake
sports
recreation
activities.Replace the word
recreational
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