The charts illustrate the number of people who were affected by four types of noise pollution in day and night in cities and rural areas in 2007.
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bar graphs provided reveals a sharp comparison of the volume of dwellers impacted by 4 categories of noise pollution namely traffic, train, aircraft and industry between Correct article usage
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, traffic-related contaminations took up the most remarkable proportions of both charts Linking Words
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In terms of the amount of four pollutants in the metropolis cities, the amount of waste from traffic was the main determinant that contributed to environmental matters Use synonyms
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nights
with 64 and 68 respectively. Use synonyms
Where as
, that from train and aircraft constituted 10 and 8, Correct your spelling
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stark contrast, there was the most insignificant figure witnessed in the industrial contaminant, to be more specific with 1 in the mornings and 0,25 Correct article usage
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nights
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As for the volume of all types of dusty waste in the suburb, the most alarming proportion was taken up by the amount of pollutants released from traffic with 33 and 24 Fix the agreement mistake
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respectively. At the opposite end of the scales, there was no response detecting any emergence of that from industry. Whilst, those of the remaining namely train and Use synonyms
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