the table and the charts below give information the police budget for 2017 and 2018 in a one area of britian. the table shows where the money came from and the chart shows how it was distributed

the table and the charts below give information the police budget for 2017 and 2018 in a one area of britian. the table shows where the money came from and the chart shows how it was distributed
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The pie charts and table provided show the income
as well as
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the outtakes of police in Britain.
Overall
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, The total income had a slight increase from 304.7 to 318.6
million
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pounds with most of it taken up by the salary of the staff. The money is increasingly being spent on technology as time passes. The distribution of wealth did not see a lot of changes ,and even the price paid for transportation and construction stayed the same at 17%.
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,
while
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the money paid to the staff still held the largest portion of the income it decreased from 75% to 69%.
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meant that in 2018 the cut of technology was around 14% with a 6% rise. The police have two major contributors to its budget, namely taxes and the national government. Both of the sources had an upsurge in the amount being paid,
however
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, the people's money saw a dramatic escalation with almost 11.1
million
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arriving at 102.3 in 2018.
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is
while
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the government only changed 175.5 to 177.8
million
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. There are other minor sources that contribute to pay with around 38
million
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pounds and less than one
million
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increase.
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