The charts below show degrees granted in different fields at the National University in the year 1990,2000 and 2010.
The
illustrates
below indicates degrees granted in different fields at the National University in the years 1990, 2000 and 2010.
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It is clear that
most students
are studying at Computer Science faculty
.
For example
, the overwhelming majority of those granted students
in 2010 studying
in Computer Science in comparison with Wrong verb form
studied
students
with another popular faculty
of medicine. The figures were 45 per cent
and twenty five
per Add a hyphen
twenty-five
cent
respectively.
Furthermore
, only 10 per cent
of student
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students
studying
at the Wrong verb form
study
faculty
of Law, Capitalize word
Faculty
whereas
the
are three times more medical Correct your spelling
they
students
.
Meanwhile, for the medicine faculty
the pattern appears to be slightly different, between 25 and thirty per Add a comma
faculty,
cent
.
In 1990 the most spreaded
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spread
students
were the humanitarian faculty
(45 per cent
), but out of this
only fifteen percent
were the student of law, which is Change the spelling
per cent
the
on six of all Correct article usage
apply
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