Task 1. The chart below shows estimated world illiteracy rates by region and by gender for the last year.

Task 1. The chart below shows estimated world illiteracy rates by region and by gender for the last year.
The bar diagram illustrates estimated world illiteracy rates by region and by gender for the
last
year.
Overall
, it is undoubtful that females have more illiteracy than males in any region of the whole diagram.
It is clear that
developed countries
haven't
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such
a big gap between genders, meanwhile, Asian countries percentage have a big amount
of
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per
cent
. The most noticeable thing shows South
Asia
with women's percentage more than half and men's with definitely
one third
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of illiteracy illustration.
Subsequently
Arab States
as
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similar to Sub-Saharan Africa have almost half per
cent
of unknowledge among females and 30 per
cent
among males.
Furthermore
, the percentage of East
Asia
with 20 per
cent
among women and 8 per
cent
among men is normal compared with South
Asia
.
As well as
Latin America which hasn't significant difference around genders estimated
12
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and 10 per
cent
for women and men respectively. In conclusion, it is undeniable that developed countries well developed and
Asia
and Africa continents have to improve their knowledge.
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