Task 1. The chart below shows estimated world illiteracy rates by region and by gender for the last year.
The bar diagram illustrates estimated world illiteracy rates by region and by gender for the
last
year.
Overall
, it is undoubtful that females have more illiteracy than males in any region of the whole
diagram.
It is clear that
developed countries haven't
Rephrase
have
such
a big gap between genders, meanwhile, Asian countries percentage have a big amount of
per Change preposition
apply
cent
. The most noticeable thing shows South Asia
with women's percentage more than half and men's with definitely one third
of illiteracy illustration. Add a hyphen
one-third
Subsequently
Arab States as
similar to Sub-Saharan Africa have almost half per Change preposition
apply
cent
of unknowledge among females and 30 per cent
among males. Furthermore
, the percentage of East Asia
with 20 per cent
among women and 8 per cent
among men is normal compared with South Asia
. As well as
Latin America which hasn't significant difference around genders estimated 12
and 10 per Change preposition
at 12
cent
for women and men respectively.
In conclusion, it is undeniable that developed countries well developed and Asia
and Africa continents have to improve their knowledge.Submitted by aikumarbekarys on
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