Some people believe that teenager should be required to do unpaid community work in their free time . This can benefit teenagers and the community as well . To what extent do you agree or disagree

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designated as a

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position

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to build a

society

by using the young population and some people have proposed that It is a good way to empower

society

without a huge amount of expenses to pay to workers ,

however

, it seems they don't want to see the harmful aspects in a long

time

,because, teenagers must familiar with the cost of living and economical life as a human ,so, I disagree with the

volunteer

working for our young part of the

society

, because , it would growth unawareness of economical issues in their mind ,so ,I will explain in following sentences . In a beginning, benefits of

volunteer

working are limited to companies and big instituitions that want to grow inn speed and cheep way ,

in addition

, if these positions have a good designation in higher level of professionist in governments ,it has a huge effect to reduve national budjet for services in community like repairing jobs, health_care services and education ,

however

, quality have sacrified indteat of quantity to accessibility all layers of population to have a free labour ,and

this

theory is more famous in Europe and England during early of 1900 ,

however

, the long outcome of these methods is reached to revolution like we saw in France, so ,

volunteer

jobs might helpful for short

time

situation nor in a long

time

,because, economic principals to manage cost of living as a family ,ust teach to youngesters and unpaid job would give them false confident to handle difficult situation and they have not act as a eminent person in their future life for their family and

society

,

likewise

, even in less amount of money we must use of teenagers for doing in workplace that they got awarness of importance of money in living in the world ,

in addition

of , our children in their spare of

time

can do excersise , dancing or learning a new skill in related their weaknesses on academic schedule in a school ,and can spend

time

with their friend and family ,go to traveling and many activities that sould shape their critical mind and creativity in same

time

,because, leasure

time

of teenagers is limited to hours outside of their academic life and it must organize in related their abilitis to cope with their education,if , we assume they must learn working in a community it must consider economic isuues not only learning a social communication and values of generousity and kindness to pay the needs of community by their

time

and their flexibilities to react with other part of our population . In conclusion ,

this

idea of unpaid jobs is harmful for

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economic mind of young people and reduce their ability to solve problems that would arise in future regarding economic status .