The graph illustrates the information about the percentages of the population living urban areas differences between 6 countries in the years 1950 to 2050.

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The graph illustrates the information about the percentages of the population living

urban

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in urban

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areas

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differences between 6

countries

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in the

years

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1950 to 2050.

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, the changes in percentages of

population

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the population

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in urban

areas

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have different numbers

with

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from

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each other.

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crystal clear that in

Africa’s

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Africa

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rations were the lowest

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the high level of population was seen in North America. Take a closer look

for

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other

countries

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, the urban

areas

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are not much change over the

years

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, when we want to compare Europe and Oceania between 1950 and 2050 we can clearly see that the urban

areas

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are nearly the same

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each

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years

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however

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on the other hand

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, we can not say the same thing for Asia

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the fact that

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Asia’s urban area percentages did not change during the

years

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In conclusion, there are changeable places in the world for urban

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. Not only

there

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these

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countries

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but

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the

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apply

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other

countries

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have these varieties of changes for urban places.

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Single idea per paragraph

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