The map below shows the village of Stokeford in 1930 and in 2010.

The map below shows the village of Stokeford in 1930 and in 2010.
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The graphs indicate the progress of the Stokeford village during an 80-year interval.
Overall
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, it is explicit that at
first,
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the village was more traditional with few inhabitants and subsequent to the modifications it became a residential place. In 1930, what stands out from the scheme is that in
this
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year, just a few families used to live there
according to
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number of the houses.
Also
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, there were local outlets and a post office across the primary school.
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, at the east-north and west-south sides of the large house were farmlands where cows were grazing. After the developments, it can be seen that in 2010, all the farmlands were removed with the aim of constructing new houses along the main road and new auxiliary roads.
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, the large house was converted to a place for retirees,
however
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, trees remained in the same place. As the final changes, shops were completely removed;
while
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some new buildings were added to the primary school.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • infrastructure
  • architectural styles
  • amenities
  • communal spaces
  • technological advancements
  • modernization
  • transportation systems
  • urbanized zones
  • local economy
  • environmental impact
  • green spaces
  • urban development
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