The maps show the developments which took place in the bookstore between 2000 and now.

The maps show the developments which took place in the bookstore between 2000 and now.
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The diagram illustrates the transition of a bookstore from 2000 to
present
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.
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, it can be easily captured that a cafe has been added to the shop which was not there in 2000 with some changes in the location of various book's departments. In 2000, most of the space was occupied by the
fiction
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section which
was covering
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almost
one third
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of the total area which
is
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was
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significantly reduced to about
one third
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one-third
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of what it was before. The layout plan
of
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3 categories of paper books (New books, Travel,
Servie
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Service
desk) remains the same. Presently, the map shows that
non-
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non-fiction
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fiction
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site from 2000 is being replaced by
cafe
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a cafe
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with sitting area at the location of cookery, hobbies and arts. These groups are now accessible at the south
site
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side
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of the bookstore where arts
is
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closer to the
entrace
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entrance
, followed by hobbies and cookery.
Fiction
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classificiation
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classification
is right beside the non-
fiction
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which was
also
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covered by
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fiction
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the fiction
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section in 2000.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words fiction with synonyms.
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