The chart show requests for information at a tourist office in the United kingdom from january to june

The chart show requests for information at a tourist office in the United kingdom from january to june
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The line graph illustrates the number of
inquiries
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for tourist information from a tourist office in the UK which was made in three different ways (in person, by letter or email and by telephone) between January and June.
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, an upward trend can be seen in telephone and
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in-person person
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requests
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,
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the inverse can be found in letter or email
inquiries
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throughout the entire span. Turning to the details,
at
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the beginning,
in person
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option was the
unpopularest
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way to ask for information about tourism which was nearly 400
inquiries
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made by
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a person
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. after January it rocketed by approximately 2000
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.
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, for the telephone
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, there was a slight drop in February month and after that, it rose dramatically by 1600
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. when it comes to the letter or email option, at the starting point, there were just below 800
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, albeit it declined by half
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of the given period.
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, After January, it decreased slightly by May. On top of that, during May and June, it depicts steady with no fluctuations.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words inquiries, requests with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "information" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "slight" was used 2 times.
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