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There seems to be an increasing trend towards assessing students through examination rather than continual assessment. What are the advantages and disadvantages of examination as a form of assessment?

#trend #students #examination #form
Regarding
education
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the education
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system
, the form of assessment is
the
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a
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 global topic. Among the various
form
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forms
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 of assessments,
examination
 is one of them and
which
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it
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 has both negative and positive sides. 
Firstly
,
examination
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the examination
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 is a classic form
to judge
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of judging
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 a
student
 in some specific parameters.
For example
, a
student
 gets a fixed curriculum for his or her entire
session
 and starts their classes
for learning
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to learn
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 from the
basic
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basics
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.
Similarly
, the
students
 do the home study for more practice and learning.
At the end
 of
their
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apply
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each
session
, they have to face exams on fixed subjects
for marking
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to mark
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 the scores on performance. Definitely, the
system
 helps the
student
 for justifying his or her performance and
also
 for the educational
certififcations
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certifications
certification
.
Conversely
, day by day the
examination
system
 shows
it's
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its
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 dark sides.
Students
 are targeting the scores only rather than understanding the
basic
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basics
show examples
. After getting the scores or certificates,
students
 can not identify
their
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the
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 specific
skils
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skills
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 that they learnt or achieved from their sessions.
In contrast
,
students
 face enormous
chellanges
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challenges
 during getting a job for lack of skills.
On the other hand
, practical skill building, namely C++, python, Data science, cooking, safety, maintenance etc,
help
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helps
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 the
student
 a lot during his career. Through the whole
session
, if a
student
 gets continual assessment on their
curriculam
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curriculum
 and skills, that will help the nation to build
it's
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its
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 structure precisely. In conclusion,
examination
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the examination
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system
 is a necessity but
with
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apply
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continual assessment throughout the
session
 will make the
student
 an asset
for
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to
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 the
counrty
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country
.
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