The pie chart shows the amount of money that a children’s charity located in the USA spent and received in one year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The pie chart shows the amount of money that a children’s charity located in the USA spent and received in one year.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The charts display the
spends
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of children's charity on various sources and
it
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earnings in the USA in one particular year.
Overall
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, the biggest proportion of costs was spent on program services and the largest income was the donations on food. The total cost of revenue sources and expenditures was approximately the same. The
gain
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money
were
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spent the most on food, which percentage was merely under 90%. The largest donations among
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the remaining
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categories were
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by community contributions, which percentage took just over 10%. The program revenue was dramatically less and gave only around 2%. Two other incomes, which were investments and grants from
government
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took 0.2% each.
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, the least amount of money was given by others incomes.
However
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, the expenses on services were the most expensive, which took roughly 95% out of all costs.
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, there were two other categories,
which
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total costs were not exceed 5%. The charges spent on fundraising were 2.6%, and left expenditure was spent on
managment
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management
and general things.
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Vocabulary: The word "gave" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • pie chart
  • children's charity
  • expenditure
  • income
  • donations
  • individuals
  • corporations
  • government grants
  • administrative costs
  • fundraising activities
  • direct aid
  • disparities
  • trends
  • anomalies
  • balance
  • implications
  • operations
  • future focus
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