The bar charts below show the number of hours each teacher spent teaching in different schools in four different countries in 2001. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The bar charts below show the number of hours each teacher spent teaching in different schools in four different countries in 2001.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The chart displays the amount of
time
teachers
spent in various schools
by
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educating in different states in 2001.
Overall
, the biggest number of
hours
was spent in the upper secondary academies in all countries, especially in the USA.
In contrast
, the smallest amount of
time
in schools, spent by
teachers
was in Japan. Japan had the smallest spent
hours
, compared to other given countries, which did not exceed 700 in any academy.
In addition
, Spain,
also
, had
little
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amount of
time
, but it was slightly bigger, than Japan, and exceeded
up to
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900.
However
, Iceland had
larger
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number in the upper secondary institutions, which was merely over 900. Despite
this
,
time
spent in two other institutions was less, than in two previous given countries.
For instance
, primary school
teachers
invested only nearly 600
hours
, to the advantage of Spain, which had approximately 650. The hugest elapsed
time
by
teachers
were
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given in the USA
ia
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in
all types of academies. The term spent in the upper secondary school was almost 1200
hours
.
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