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The bar charts below show the number of hours each teacher spent teaching in different schools in four different countries in 2001. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The bar charts below show the number of hours each teacher spent teaching in different schools in four different countries in 2001. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The chart displays the amount of
time
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teachers
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 spent in various schools
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educating in different states in 2001.
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, the biggest number of
hours
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 was spent in the upper secondary academies in all countries, especially in the USA.
In contrast
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, the smallest amount of
time
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 in schools, spent by
teachers
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 was in Japan. Japan had the smallest spent
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, compared to other given countries, which did not exceed 700 in any academy.
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, Spain,
also
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, had
little
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 amount of
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, but it was slightly bigger, than Japan, and exceeded
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900.
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, Iceland had
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a larger
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 number in the upper secondary institutions, which was merely over 900. Despite
this
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,
time
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 spent in two other institutions was less, than in two previous given countries.
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, primary school
teachers
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 invested only nearly 600
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, to the advantage of Spain, which had approximately 650. The hugest elapsed
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 by
teachers
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were
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 given in the USA
ia
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in
 all types of academies. The term spent in the upper secondary school was almost 1200
hours
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.
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