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The graph below shows the differences in wheat exports over three different areas. write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.

The graph below shows the differences in wheat exports over three different areas. write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.
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The line graph illustrates the export of
wheat
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 in Australia, Canada, and the European community from 1985 to 1990. The units are measured in millions of
tonnes
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.
Overall
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,
wheat
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exports
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 in the three regions witnessed different trends over a period of time.
Wheat
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exports
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 in Canada and the European countries experienced an increase with some fluctuation.
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, in Australia, the number decreased gradually. As the line graph shows, Australia's
exports
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 began at 15
million
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tonnes
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 in 1985. The
exports
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 increased to about 16
million
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tonnes
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 in 1986 before falling to just over 10
million
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 in 1990. Meanwhile, in Canada,
exports
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 witnessed an increase from around 19
million
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tonnes
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 in 1985 to 25
million
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tonnes
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 in 1988.
Afterward
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, they dropped suddenly to below 15
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tonnes
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 in the following year
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 but
then
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 rose dramatically to almost 20
million
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tonnes
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 in 1990.
By contrast
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,
wheat
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exports
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 in the European community saw a rise in the six-year period. In 1985, the
exports
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 stood at around 16
million
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tonnes
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then
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 increased gradually to over 20
million
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tonnes
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 in 1990.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words wheat, tonnes, exports, million with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "gradually" was used 2 times.
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