the graph below shows the number of shops that closed and the number of new shops that opened in one country between 2011 and 2018

the line graph depicts the quantity of

closure

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closures

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and

openings

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shops

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during a seven years period in a particular country From 2011 to 2018. As

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can be seen , the number of

shops

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which were opened reached its peak in 2011 (about 8,500). The following

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the opening

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experienced a

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fall (approximately by 4000). after 2012, the trend of openings increased gradually(from 4000 4, 6000). The opening saw another noticeable drop in 2015. (by 2000)

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From 2015 to 2017, the number of closures

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stayed steady

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. (about 4000)In the

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, 2018 had a

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fall.

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, from 2011 to 2014, the number of closures

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Fleetented around (6000,7000), but in 2015 it reached the lowest Point over a period of seven

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. ( just under 1000)

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, the figure for closed

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remained stable between 2016 and 2018. (from 5ana to Gone). Incontrast, hewapend

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indkuted a dunward treudin the Same

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