The number of students who choose to study mathematics at university is low. Why do you think this is? What can be done about this situation?
Nowadays, it seems that
students
' interest in taking mathematics
as their major at university has remained low. One possible explanation for this
situation is that they have been thinking that mathematics
is a difficult subject
to study since primary school
. The best solution for this
situation is for teachers
to build students
' interest in mathematics
since primary school
by making classes more attractive.
Students
' mindsets about mathematics
have remained negative. They consider math a big scary thing because instead
of making mathematics
a fun subject
, most teachers
have made this
subject
a serious and boring subject
since primary school
. It might be because this
subject
requires the full attention of students
and high concentration in order to be understood. For example
, students
love studying the arts because they can discuss and work in teams with their friends. As a result
, they found out that the arts are a fun subject
.
This
situation can be achieved if teachers
can change students
' mindsets about mathematics
from a young age. Teachers
can start by making the class attractive. For example
, teachers
can do classes outdoors so that students
can feel a little bit more relaxed when studying math, or teachers
can make study groups and build interesting discussions among students
.
In conclusion, perhaps students
have a low interest in mathematics
because they believe that it has been a scary subject
since they were young. The best solution is that teachers
should play a role in changing students
' minds in primary school
and making this
subject
attractive.Submitted by ru.kabiru.biru on
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