The map show the changes that took place in the bookstore before and after 2000.
At
the
first glance, these two maps compare the changes Correct article usage
apply
of
the shop layout between the year 2000 and now.
The most important news here is the cafe which is located in the middle of the bookstore. There are three small tables, all with four seats, and the counter for selling of cafe and small snacks. After you get in through the entrance, there is the service desk on the right, the travel and the new books just in front of the door. These locations have not changed since Change preposition
in
year
2000. Change the article
the year
On the contrary
, the
books of different genres, Correct article usage
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as
fiction, non-fiction, art, hobbies and cookery, Correct quantifier usage
such as
they
are possible to find now on your left side in one big bookcase.
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To conclude
, the best improvement of the bookstore is the new cafe in the centre of the shop,
and Remove the comma
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relocation
of all genres of Correct article usage
the relocation
the
accessible books together in one place.Correct article usage
apply
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