The chart below gives information about how families in one country spent their weekly income in 1968 and in 2018. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart provides
Correct your spelling
Information
Informanton
about how much families Spent their weekly income including diffident (8) groups (food, housing ,
fuel and power, clothing and footwear , household Correct your spelling
information
goods
, Personal good
, transport and Leisure) in Fix the agreement mistake
goods
percent
. Change the spelling
per cent
Overall
, the proportion of expenses in 1968 is higher than than
(2018) . Despite Correct word choice
that
this
, household goods
stay
stable Wrong verb form
stayed
in
two years .
As it is clear, the most striking element is food, it got the Change preposition
for
highest-proportion
in 1968 (35%). Correct your spelling
highest proportion
While
,in 2018 it is recorded approximately
Seventeen Present. Change preposition
at approximately
On the other hand
, leisure
component witnessed changes which Correct article usage
the leisure
is
Change the verb form
are
dubele
around (10%) in 2018.
By far, household Correct your spelling
double
bubble
goods
recorded identical
rate over Correct article usage
an identical
mentioned
Period of time (7%) . Correct article usage
the mentioned
In addition
, housing and transport was go
up almost(10% ) .Change the verb form
went
However
, fuel and Power and personal goods
was
high in 1968 and it is went down in 2018 • Change the verb form
were
Finally
Families Spent alot
of Correct your spelling
a lot
mony
Correct your spelling
money
in
Clothing and footwear in 1968 which present (10%), on the one hand , the other year got (5%).Change preposition
on
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Vocabulary: Replace the words goods with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "present" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "go up" was used 2 times.
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