You had to cancel a meeting with a friend. Write a letter to him/her, in your letter - Apologise for cancelling the meeting - Explain why you couldn't be there - Suggest an alternative day when you could meet
Hi David,
I am writing a cancellation letter of our trip for next
week
.
I was so elated when I decided to visit again for a long time. However
, I regret to say
you that I have to postpone our tour Verb problem
tell
due
my Change preposition
because
uncle
is
admitted Wrong verb form
has been
in
the hospital Change preposition
to
from
two days.
Suddenly my Change preposition
for
uncle
was ill and he had heart
attack on Friday. I admitted to him Add an article
a heart
in
the emergency ward and Change preposition
apply
necessary
medication was given to him Correct article usage
the necessary
from
the doctor. Change preposition
by
Although
, he came out from
danger but still he is in under observation. The doctor had given hope that he would recover in one Change preposition
of
week
. Furthermore
, I have to stay with him throughout the week
because he has no child to look after for
my Change preposition
apply
uncle
. So I Add a missing verb
am ashmed
ashmed
that we could not continue our plan for next Correct your spelling
ashamed
aimed
week
.
After my uncle
well we could plan our tour in the next month. If it is possible for you we can plan 1st week
of coming
month. I am waiting for your prompt response so we continue our trip.
Best Regards,Add an article
the coming
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Use clear paragraphing and ensure each paragraph contains a single main idea for better structure.Eliminate redundancy and improve overall clarity of expression.
task achievement
Remember to include all parts of the task: apologize for the cancellation, explain the situation, and suggest a new time to meet. Incorporate all these elements for a higher task achievement score.