You had to cancel a meeting with a friend. Write a letter to him/her, in your letter - Apologise for cancelling the meeting - Explain why you couldn't be there - Suggest an alternative day when you could meet

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Hi David, I am writing a cancellation letter of our trip for next

week

. I was so elated when I decided to visit again for a long time.

However

, I regret to

say

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tell

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you that I have to postpone our tour

due

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because

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uncle

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has been

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admitted

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the hospital

from

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for

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two days. Suddenly my

uncle

was ill and he had

heart

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a heart

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attack on Friday. I admitted to him

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apply

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the emergency ward and

necessary

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the necessary

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medication was given to him

from

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the doctor.

Although

, he came out

from

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danger but still he is in under observation. The doctor had given hope that he would recover in one

week

Furthermore

, I have to stay with him throughout the

week

because he has no child to look after

for

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uncle

. So I

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am ashmed

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ashmed

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ashamed

aimed

that we could not continue our plan for next

week

. After my

uncle

well we could plan our tour in the next month. If it is possible for you we can plan 1st

week

coming

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month. I am waiting for your prompt response so we continue our trip. Best Regards,

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coherence cohesion

Use clear paragraphing and ensure each paragraph contains a single main idea for better structure.Eliminate redundancy and improve overall clarity of expression.

task achievement

Remember to include all parts of the task: apologize for the cancellation, explain the situation, and suggest a new time to meet. Incorporate all these elements for a higher task achievement score.

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3Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
2Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
14Grammar mistakes
 

6 paragraphs

182 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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Topic Vocabulary:

Apologies, Regretfully, Unforeseen, Unavoidable, Commitment, Inconvenience, Remorseful
Reschedule, Propose, Flexibility, Accommodate, Enthusiasm
Looking forward, Sincerely, Best regards, Warm wishes, Catch up, Make it up to you, Make amends

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