The chart belows shows the percentage of students joining North West University

The chart belows shows the percentage of students joining North West University
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The given pie charts illustrate the number of
students
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who enrolled at
North West
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North-West
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University for different faculties and from different continents in percentage.
Overall
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, it can be seen that the majority of
students
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chose the Arts, Computing and Science faculties
while
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a very low amount of people joined Law and Medicine.
Whereas
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, most of the arts
students
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come from the South American continent as well.
To begin
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, the large percentage of
students
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who joined to arts
faculty
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was 23%
while
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computing and medicine recorded 22% and 21% respectively.
However
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, only 5% of undergraduates chose to study in medicine
faculty
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which is the lowest among others. The second lowest freshers joined to law
faculty
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just 6% in total.
Furthermore
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, other faculties
such
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as business and engineering
also
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got
students
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about 14% and 9% respectively,
On the other hand
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, when closely looking at art
faculty
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student's nationality the massive number of undergraduates enrolled on
university
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from South America is 79% and second place
was
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taken by European
students
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at 21% but freshers who are from Africa, Asia and Australia are
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the comparatively
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low amount and it is only 2%, 4% and 6% respectively.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words students, faculty with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • enrollment
  • percentage
  • trend
  • peak
  • trough
  • faculty
  • department
  • fluctuate
  • demographics
  • academic year
  • popularity
  • reputation
  • external factors
  • job market
  • predict
  • analyze
  • comparison
  • statistical data
  • chart
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