The chart belows shows the percentage of students joining North West University
The given pie charts illustrate the number of
students
who enrolled at North West
University for different faculties and from different continents in percentage.
Add a hyphen
North-West
Overall
, it can be seen that the majority of students
chose the Arts, Computing and Science faculties while
a very low amount of people joined Law and Medicine. Whereas
, most of the arts students
come from the South American continent as well.
To begin
, the large percentage of students
who joined to arts faculty
was 23% while
computing and medicine recorded 22% and 21% respectively. However
, only 5% of undergraduates chose to study in medicine faculty
which is the lowest among others. The second lowest freshers joined to law faculty
just 6% in total. Furthermore
, other faculties such
as business and engineering also
got students
about 14% and 9% respectively,
On the other hand
, when closely looking at art faculty
student's nationality the massive number of undergraduates enrolled on university
from South America is 79% and second place Add an article
the university
was
taken by European Change the verb form
were
students
at 21% but freshers who are from Africa, Asia and Australia are comparatively
low amount and it is only 2%, 4% and 6% respectively.Add an article
the comparatively
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